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这只是一场血淋淋的狂欢,只是一场血淋淋的狂欢。我几乎没法度过其中的四分之一,因为里面所有的血淋淋都变得很无聊,有些是无意中搞笑的。而且它的速度非常慢,小指甚至没有理由杀彩虹冲刺或任何其他小马,我甚至不喜欢大联盟,但这个故事仍然是可怕的
This was just a gore fest and nothing but a gore fest. I could barely get through a quarter of it, because all the gore in it just got really boring and some of it unintentionally funny. Also it was painfully slow, Pinkie doesn't even have a reason to kill Rainbow Dash or any other ponies for that matter. And I don't even like MLP but this story was still awful.
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这个故事跟很多糟糕的粉丝小说一样,出于急躁而急躁。这个故事之所以广为人知,唯一的原因是因为它来自一个像你这样受欢迎的地方MLP:职能指令手册事实上,这是格里姆达克第一个真正被认可的故事
This story follows in the trend of being edgy for edgy's sake like a lot of bad fanfiction/creepypasta. The only reason this story is as well known as it is is because it's from a property as popular as MLP:FiM, as well as the fact that it's the first grimdark story of this nature to get any real recognition. - regularshowman
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有史以来最糟糕的奶油面食,我的意思是在所有的奶油面食之后再加上一些奶油面食,但是用它来编造一个空洞的故事是错误的,克里皮,意大利面,不是核心,意大利面,不是血腥的过去,粉丝们只是在胡闹可怕的令人不安的布朗尼:Freky I should't sleep如果你想看令人不安的话,那就不令人不安了去看Squwards Suiced Sleen 1999Russian Selp实验……但是纸杯蛋糕不会影响糟糕的计划和糟糕的情节俄罗斯睡眠实验和Squwards Suicade计划得很好,有足够可怕的内容,恐怖的内容,Rake有所有这些,但任何小马奶油面食都不好,计划得很差
Worst crepypasta ever core and core blood and blod I mean to add some core and blood is ok after all its crepypasta, but to make a hole story with it that is wrong CREPYPASTA not corepasta not bloodpast and the fanbase just wrongFangirl:Scary disturbingBronis:Freky I shouldn't sleepIts not disturbing if you wanna see disturbing go see Squwards Suicede Slender 1999Rusian Selp Experiment... But cupcakes not disturbing poor planing and bad plot on the other hand Russian Sleep Experiment and Squwards Suicade are good planned with enough scary content creepy content and the Rake has all that but any Pony crepypasta is bad and poorly planed
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小指派是个轻松开朗的人物,她为什么要杀小马呢?这个令人毛骨悚然的巴斯塔只是一个充满了折磨、鲜血和器官的血腥节日,对于一个杀手来说是一个糟糕的借口。说真的,这个垃圾就像彩虹工厂一样糟糕
Pinkie Pie is a light-hearted cheerful character, why would she kill anypony? This creepypasta is just a gore fest filled with torture and blood and organs, with a poor excuse for a killer. Seriously, this crap is just as bad as Rainbow Factory.
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绝对没有意义。这是一部折磨人的色情片,其他什么都没有。这与节目无关,作者应该为此感到羞耻,因为这绝对是一个可怕的概念
Absolutely no point. It's a torture porn and nothing else. It has nothing to do with the show and the writer should be ashamed of this because this is an absolute terrible concept.
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一匹粉红色的马杀死了一匹蓝色的马,还对她的重要器官说了些双关语。太吓人了!1! 11尽管如此,考虑到MLP不是真的,这个意大利面还是很吓人的。另外,我也不看这个节目,所以没有什么可怕的想法
A pink horse kills a blue horse and makes puns about her vital organs. SO SPOOPY! 1! 11 Really though, this pasta could not be less scary,considering MLP isn't real. Plus, I don't watch the show, so no creepy thoughts about it there.
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太可怕了。我看过这部动画片,如果动画片就像故事一样,一个词,可怕,平克派所做的一切都是为了没有好的理由,甚至一点点好的理由杀死彩虹达什。而她那可怕的词“生活是一个聚会”是可怕的。真的吗?哦,好吧。至少彩虹工厂比纸杯蛋糕好
Just awful. I have seen an animation of this, and if the animation was just like the story, one word, terrible, All Pinke pie does was killing rainbow dash for no good or even a bit good reason. And her scary word called Life Is A Party is awful. Seriously? Oh well. at least Rainbow Factory is better than Cupcakes.
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我自己也不是一匹野马,但是小指杀死其他的小马却与她的性格格格不入。这就好像鲍瑟突然变成了一个电脑迷,加入了马里奥兄弟。这不合适,是吗?-非法护士长
I'm not a brony myself, but pinkie killing other ponies goes WAY out of her character. its like if bowser suddenly was a computer nerd and joined the mario bros. doesn't fit, does it? - UnlawfulMatron
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我喜欢这种意大利面的唯一原因是它让我认识了松饼和平卡米娜黛安派
The only reason I sort of like this pasta is it introduced me to Muffins and Pinkamena Diane Pie.
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说真的?我读过的最愚蠢的故事。愚蠢而毫无意义
Seriously? Dumbest story I've ever read. Just stupid and pointless.
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