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这怎么不是第一次?杰夫的故事被高估了,但至少它是独特的,写得很好。这个故事显然是一个巨大的模仿杰夫杀手。甚至她的流行语是去睡觉,以我的王子结束。令人毛骨悚然的pastas是不是意味着可怕?这是一个冒牌货,她的设计使她成为一个玛丽苏。我是说,她的头发怎么突然变得紫色条纹呢?为什么她的裙子这么短?我讨厌这个故事
How the hell is this not first? Jeff's story is overrated, but at least it was unique and well written. This story is clearly a huge ripoff of Jeff the killer. Even her catchphrase is Go To Sleep, ending with My Prince. Weren't creepy pastas meant to be scary? This is a ripoff, and her design makes her a Mary Sue. I mean, how does her hair suddenly get a purple streak in it? And why is her skirt so short? I hate this story.
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这个故事非常简单明了。对于一个巨魔意大利面来说,这将是一个惊人的故事,但正是“令人毛骨悚然”这个关键词毁了它。在我读它之前,我知道它会很可怕,但它比我想象的更糟。这是对杀手杰夫的剽窃,这甚至不是一个好故事开始,她太性感,有史以来最老套的角色,最重要的是:她是杰夫的粉丝。--我甚至不喜欢杰夫,但这真的很愚蠢
This story is just awful plain and simple. For a troll pasta it would be AMAZING, but its that key word 'creepy' that ruins it. Before I read it I knew it was going to be terrible, but it was even worse than I thought. It is a rip off of Jeff the killer which isn't even a good story to begin with, she is too sexualized, the most cliche character ever, and to top it off: she is a jeff FAN GIRL. -_- I don't even like Jeff but this is really stupid.
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这部片子让我很失望。听起来像是对杀手杰夫的廉价翻拍,只有一个女性角色。整个故事听起来很像杀手杰夫,她甚至有和杰夫一样的流行语,只是以“我的王子”结尾。到目前为止,这是我唯一听过不喜欢的片子
This one really disappointed me. It sounds like a cheap remake of Jeff the Killer, only with a female character. The whole story sounds so similar to Jeff the Killer and she even has the same catch phrase as Jeff, only it ends with "my prince." So far, this is the only one I've heard that I don't care for.
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在找到尼娜之后,我真的开始为杰夫感到难过。我曾经无法同情其他人,但尼娜告诉我,我真的应该为可怜的杰夫感到难过
After finding about Nina, I actually started to feel sorry for Jeff...I was once incapable of feeling pity for other human beings, but Nina has showed me that I should really feel sorry for poor Jeff.
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凶手杰夫不是写得最好的意大利面,但至少它很有趣。这糟糕的意大利面还差得远呢!见鬼,连Sonic.exe都比这个好!它是由一个杰夫·凡吉尔制作的,他把自己的角色复制粘贴到了一个更糟糕的角色上
Jeff the killer wasn't the best written pasta ever, but at least it was entertaining. This crappypasta is nowhere close! Heck, even Sonic.exe is better than this! It was made by a Jeff fangirl who copy pasted his character onto an even worse character. - TwilightKitsune
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我出于某种原因爱杰夫,然后不知怎的,他在谷歌地图上找到了我,我猜,现在我爱他——斯波德曼芬1000
I love jeff for some reason then somehow he finds me on Google map I guess and now I love him - spodermanfan1000
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杰夫的杀手扯皮,甚至捕捉阶段和外观,见鬼,甚至部分的故事!
Jeff the killer rip off, even the catch phase and appearance, heck even parts of the story!
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这完全是胡扯。我的意思是,她就像凶手杰夫。她甚至有同样的流行语。“去睡觉吧,我的王子。”简直是愚蠢
This is a total ripoff. I mean,she's just like Jeff The Killer. She even has the same catchphrase. "Go to sleep,my prince." Just plain stupid.
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凶手简和杰夫差不多,但不知怎么的,他们把事情搞得更糟了
Jane the killer is kind of alright like jeff, but somehow they made this worse
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和这堆垃圾相比,杀手杰夫和索尼克都是艺术品。这也是我最喜欢的垃圾糕点之一。—我不喜欢
Compared to this piece of garbage Jeff the Killer and Sonic.exe are works of art. This is also one of my favorite crappypastas. - IAmNotARobot
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