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这个故事是愚蠢的化身。一开始我忍不住笑了。后来我在瓦特帕德上找到了原著。它让我恶心。它让我很生气，我查了一下这个故事的作者。当我写的时候，他们告诉我所有发生在娜塔莉身上的事，都发生在他们身上。现在，别误会。很有可能会发生这样的事情。但是他们接着说，他们想教育人们这个问题。然后我就不高兴了。你不会通过一个令人毛骨悚然的阿斯塔故事来教育人们严肃的问题。一个主要为了受欢迎的故事

This story is stupidity incarnate. At first I couldn't stop laughing. Then I found the original on Wattpad. It make me sick to my stomach. It made me so mad that I looked up the author of said story. When I wrote then, they told me that all of what happened to Natalie, happened to them. Now, don't get me wrong. It's very possible that something like this Could happen. But then they went on to say that they wanted to educate people of the problem... Then I got upset. You don't educate people of Serious issues, through a Creepypasta story. A story primarily made for popularity.

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这个故事是愚蠢的化身。一开始我忍不住大笑。后来我找到了原始的瓦特帕德。它让我恶心。它让我很生气，我查了一下这个故事的作者。当我写的时候，他们告诉我，所有发生在娜塔莉身上的事，都发生在他们身上。现在，不要误会我。很可能像这样的事情可能会发生。但后来他们继续说他们想教育人们这个问题。然后我就不高兴了。你不能通过一个令人毛骨悚然的阿斯塔故事来教育人们严肃的问题。一个主要为了受欢迎的故事

This story is stupidity incarnate. At first I couldn't stop laughing. Then I found the originalon Wattpad. It make me sick to my stomach. It made me so mad that I looked up the author of said story. When I wrote then, they told me that all of what happened to Natalie, happened to them. Now, don't get me wrong. It's very possible that something like this Could happen. But then they went on to say that they wanted to educate people of the problem... Then I got upset. You don't educate people of Serious issues, through a Creepypasta story. A story primarily made for popularity.

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娜塔莉的眼睛有多大？另外，如果她缝了嘴，她可能会说得有点像汉尼拔·莱克特。事实上，我想象过她手里拿着两个刀片的发条，染着血的灰色外套，深色的头发和正常的石灰色眼睛。是的，这并不准确。发光的眼睛是如此逼真

How big was said clock Natalie put in her eye? Plus if she stitched her mouth she would possibly talk sort of like Hannibal Lecter. I actually pictured Clockwork with two blades in her hands, blood staining a grey coat, and having darker hair and normal lime colored eyes. Yeah that wasnt accurate. And the glowing eyes are EVER SO REALISTIC

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语法太糟糕了，我受不了。娜塔莉是个可笑的杀手杰夫，整个故事糟透了。它充满了毫无意义的血腥，没有真正的情节-它的全部目的是作为一个什么样的人会成为杰夫的幻想。现在我只是想知道为什么我甚至懒得读它

The grammar was so horrible that I could not stand it. Natalie is a ridiculous Jeff The Killer ripoff, and the whole story just sucks. It's filled with pointless gore and has no real plot- the entire point of it is to serve as a fangirl fantasy of what it would be like to be Jeff. Now I'm just wondering why I even bothered to read it.

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关于这个故事的一切都是愚蠢的化身。当我第一次听到它的时候，我忍不住笑了起来。这是一个没有乱伦强奸儿童的故事。我以为这一定是一个巨魔面食。但后来我发现原来的，这让我恶心。我最终找到了那个人。我给他们写信。他们试图让我相信这一切都发生在他们身上。现在我不是说这是不可能的。但是他们说他们试图解决这个问题。如果不是一个令人毛骨悚然的故事，一个恐怖的故事，我会接受的为了受欢迎

Everything about this story is stupidity incarnate. When I first Heard it, I couldn't stop laughing. (This was one without the incestuous child rape in it.) I thought that this had to be a troll pasta. But then I found the original, and it made me sick. I eventually found out who the person was on the. And I wrote them. They tried to convince me that all of this happened to them... Now I'm not saying it's impossible. But they said that they were trying to address the problem. I would've been ok with that, had it not have been a Creepypasta. A horror story, Made for popularity.

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C级角色：主要这个角色是一个杀手杰夫和玛丽苏。作者故意在故事中塑造所有的角色，让观众为她感到难过。所有发生在这个女孩身上的创伤事件都是为了让观众为她感到难过。然后我们都应该为这个爱发牢骚的急躁情绪丁东欢呼，当她不知何故得到了帮助超级能力和躲避子弹就像她在矩阵。其余的角色几乎没有深度或个性。阴谋女孩被虐待，欺负，强奸，并慢慢变得疯狂，因为阴谋。基本上杰夫的杀手。亚瑟的设计是没有创意和无聊的。他妈的血从哪里贴口袋手表你该死的眼睛缝合你的脸！？

Characters:The main character is a Jeff the killer ripoff and mary sue. The author purposely makes all the characters in the story so the audience feels bad for her. All the traumatic events that happen to this girl is to make the audience feel bad for her. Then we're all supposed to cheer this whiny edgy emo ding dong when she somehow gets superpowers and dodges bullets like she's in the matrix.The rest of the characters have little to no depth or personality at all.PlotGirl is abused, bullied, raped and slowly turned insane because plot. Basically Jeff the Killer.ArtHer design is unoriginal and boring. Where the hell is the blood from sticking a pocket watch your damn eye and stitching your face!?

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我不想说一些冒犯性的话，但这个故事在攻击性上是愚蠢的。在某种程度上，你可以说典型的音速怪兽是更糟糕的，但至少那些没有离开我与不寻常的愤怒，这做了

I hate to say something is offensive, but this story is offensively stupid. In a way you could say that the typical Sonic creepypasta is worse, but at least those don't leave me with the unusually anger that this did.

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在我看来，情节的转变是可怕的。去掉你自己的眼睛，她可能在视觉上没有任何问题，然后用一个时钟代替它？这看起来更像是折磨色情片

The plot twist was horrible in my opinion. Removing your own eye, which she probably didn't have any problems sight wise, and replacing it with a clock? This seems more like torture porn than anything else.

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打斗场面是不切实际的，血腥是过度的，这个角色只杀死从恐惧中消失的笨蛋，等等。我可以整天列出为什么这个故事糟糕的原因，但我想你明白的想法

The fight scenes are unrealistic, the gore is way overdone, the character only kills douchebags (which diminishes from the scariness), etc. I could go on all day listing reasons why this story sucked, but I think you get the idea.

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我不喜欢发条。我喜欢她背后的故事，但我觉得她很蠢。比如你为什么要把自己的眼睛摘下来，放一个时钟在它的地方！我觉得她是在浪费我的时间

I don't like Clockwork. I liked her back story and all but I think she's stupid. Like why would you remove your own eye and put a clock in it's place! I think she's an waste of my time.