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事实上，这么多人都说这是“写得好”是对合法作家的一种侮辱。这个故事情节是难以置信的精心设计和不切实际的，每个角色都平淡无奇，没有个性，尤其是杰夫，他从一个完全正常的人，偶尔会有“奇怪的感觉”，瞬间就变成了一个杀人的反社会者，杰夫99%的伤都是可笑的，因为他被点燃，皮肤变白，嘴唇变红，头发变黑？多科学啊！杰夫霍普的照片很明显已经被感染了，而且这张照片还没有被剪去在高中的时候？这幅画显然是个成年人

The fact that so many people are calling this "well-written" is honestly insulting to legitimate writers. The plot is incredibly contrived and unrealistic, every character is flat with no personality (especially Jeff, who flips from perfectly normal with occasional "strange feelings" to a homicidal sociopath in a second), and 99% of Jeff's injuries are ridiculous (after being lit on fire, his skin turned white, lips red, and hair black? How scientific! Not to mention how Jeff hasn't gone blind from dust and bacteria after burning his eyelids off, and how his cliche knife-carved "smile" hasn't gotten infected without medical treatment). The scariest thing about this story is its picture, which, after a couple years, has become very dated and obviously photoshopped (also, isn't Jeff supposed to be in, like, high school? The picture is clearly a grown man).

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我看了这个，一点也不吓人。只是有人杀人。我只是觉得有点不安。这个画面并不吓人，只是一张白皙的脸，带着眼睛和微笑。写得很糟糕。杰夫失去了我们的控制，开始无缘无故地杀害所有人。没有理由随意杀人。毫无意义。我不敢相信警察还没有抓到他。只有一架该死的直升机和一支军队，他只是一个拿着刀的孩子。你有所有的力量。他没有。写这篇文章的人都很懒。对那些认为虚构人物很“辣”的人，我希望你能把脑子修好。来找我

I read this, and it wasn't scary at all. It's just someone who kills people. I only find it kind of disturbing. And this image isn't scary, just a plain white face with eyes and a smile. This is badly written. Jeff just gets our of control and starts killing everyone for no explainable reason. There is no reason to kill random people. Nothing makes sense. And I can't believe the police hasn't caught him yet. Just gets a damn helicopter and an army, he's just a kid with a knife. You have all the power. He doesn't. Whoever wrote this is LAZY. And to his fangirls who think a fictional character is "hot", I hope you get your brain fixed. Come at me

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这孩子的态度，他的力量，或者是他的数量。FANGIRLS需要把他们的头从他的屁股里拿出来，表现得像一个普通的讨厌的意大利面迷，而不是和一个杀人犯一起吃任何令人毛骨悚然的意大利面。我最喜欢的令人毛骨悚然的意大利面是在楼梯上。阅读它，这样你就能真正领略到什么是一个好故事。一秒钟是一个普通的情绪少年，也有一个戏剧性的问题。下一个，他是连环杀手？什么，就因为漂白剂。漂白剂。我可以在这个故事里加上一句，他13岁？他13岁，能躲过警察的子弹，杀了他全家，还可以当个“坏蛋”？！？！不！作者后来确实改变了这一点，但这个故事仍然是一个可悲的浪费时间。回顾一下；1.芳吉尔需要像一个真正的粉丝一样读一些好的令人毛骨悚然的意大利面，而不是写杰夫或任何一个毛骨悚然的巴斯塔的粉丝。尊重网站。你应该感到害怕，而不是高潮。2.这个故事写得很糟糕，而且非常更奇特的

This kid has no excuse for his attitude, his strength, or his amount if FANGIRLS. FANGIRLS need to get their heads outta his ass and actually act like a normal creepy pasta fan and not go goo goo for any creepy pasta with a homicidal guy. My favorite creepy pasta is The Stairs. (Read it so you can actually get a decent taste of what a good story is.) One second is a normal emo teen that has too much of a drama issue. The next, he's a serial killer? What, just because of some bleach. BLEACH. And might I add that in this story, he's 13? he's 13 AND CAN DODGE ALL THE POLICE'S BULLETS, KILL HIS ENTIRE FAMILY, AND BE A "Badass"?!?! NO! The writer did change this later on but the story was still a pathetic waste of time. To recap;1. FANGIRLS need to read some good creepy pasta like an actual fan would and not write fan fics of Jeff, or any creepypasta. Respect the website. You are supposed to get scared, not have a orgasm.2. The story is poorly written and very ... more - Peculiar

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一开始我以为这很吓人，但当我上了科学课，我马上意识到这是错的。在很多方面都是错的。他被烧焦和漂白，但他的皮肤变白，嘴唇变脆变红，头发变黑？这甚至不符合生物学，更不用说科学了。他那精雕细琢的笑容，自从他在树林里到处跑来跑去，没有因为不能眨眼而被太阳晒伤，也没有失明。他从一个漫不经心的少年变成了一个有着“奇怪感觉”的人，然后一个完整的精神病患者在一个章节里。逻辑。-分裂

At first I thought this was generally scary, but then when I got my science classes, I knew immediately that this was...wrong. Wrong in so many ways. He gets burned and bleached, but his skin turns white, lips crisp and red, and his hair black? That wouldn't even fit in biology, let alone science. His carved smile hasn't got infected without medical treatment, since he runs around in the woods and all. His eyes haven't burned up from the sun via not being able to blink, nor has he gone blind in the least. He goes from casual teenager to someone with "weird feels", and then a complete psycho in one chapter. LOGIC. - Diistortions

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被高估为垃圾。怎么没人看到他们的战斗？2.警察真的会把杰夫送到朱维他们真的没那么蠢3.兰迪和他的帮派几天后从骨折和刺伤中恢复过来4.他根本不应该有头发，它应该都被烧掉了。5.他的皮肤不会变白6.杰夫应该在烧眼皮的时候把眼睛烧坏。7.即使杰夫设法不烧伤眼睛，他也会失明，因为灰尘会进入他的眼睛。8.如果不接受治疗，微笑会感染的。9.他的父母不会报警或叫救护车，不是吗刚接到一枪。杰夫无缘无故地杀了他的家人。杰夫无缘无故地发疯了。你要么生来就是个精神病患者，要么在经历了创伤后变成了精神病患者，杰夫是个正常的孩子。完蛋了！

Overrated as crap1.How did NO ONE see their fight?2.The police would have really sent Jeff to Juvy they really are not that dumb.3. Randy and his gang recover from broken bones and stabs after DAYS.4.He shouldn't even have hair at all, it should be all burnt off.5.His skin wouldn't have turned white6.Jeff should have burned his eyes out while burning his lids.7.Even if Jeff managed to not burn his eyes he would go blind since dust will get in his eyes.8.Without medical treatment that smile will get infected.9.His parents don't call police or ambulance no they just got a SHOT GUN10. Jeff kills his family for no reason11.Jeff went insane for no reason. You are either born a psycopath or become one after traumatic events, Jeff was a normal kid.BUSTED!

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我承认我喜欢这个故事，也喜欢杰夫本人，但芳吉尔夫妇毁了他，我喜欢杰夫和他的故事，但后来芳吉尔一家来了，把一切都毁了，让他变得少女气，少了些血腥，先是《暮光之城》毁了吸血鬼，然后是埃莫小孩毁了金属，现在这个？杰夫一点也不吸引人，但他看起来还是很酷的，因为他看起来很血腥。我不喜欢这个故事，因为杰夫很性感。我喜欢这个故事，因为杰夫看起来血淋淋的，我喜欢这个故事，他会制作一张很棒的食人尸专辑封面——countnightdark13

I'll admit I like the story and jeff himself but the fangirls ruined him for me I liked jeff and his story the way it was but then the fangirls came and ruined everything and made him all girly and less gory first twilight ruined vampires then emo kids ruined metal and now this? And jeff is not attractive in the slightest but he still looks really cool cause he looks really bloodyI don't like the story because jeff is "hot" I like the story because jeff looks very gory and bloody and I love that stuff and he would make a great cannibal corpse album cover - countnightdark13

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对于我不喜欢这个令人毛骨悚然的帕斯塔，我现在真的只能想到两个主要原因：一是粉丝群太差了，看看这些人制作的各种献礼艺术和游戏吧！他们认为，“噢，杰夫受够了，我们应该为杰夫感到难过，他疯了是因为[插入一些幻想的+/不现实的原因]。”伙计，我知道让你的皮肤漂白是很疯狂的，但这并不是去实施大规模谋杀或其他什么的真正理由。第二，这个故事没有意义。一个怎么会被点燃，然后呢不知何故保留了他们所有的头发，另外把头发炭化成不同的颜色，漂白剂注入他们的皮肤，也不知何故设法不让他们看起来像烧伤或其他什么？为什么那些孩子在第一次见面的时候就拿刀指着杰夫？原谅我不太了解这个故事，但我认为这些孩子就像12岁的孩子一样。我以为12岁的孩子玩的是“地雷手艺”、“机器人游戏”和“使命召唤”，而不是在其他12岁的孩子身上拔刀……更多

I can only really think of two major reasons at the moment as to why I don't like this Creepypasta: One, the fanbase is terrible. Look at all the tribute art and games these people make! They think, "Oh, Jeff had it so hard, we should feel sorry for Jeff guys, he went insane because of [insert fanciful/unrealistic reason(s)]." Dude, I understand that getting your skin bleached is pretty crazy, but that's not really a reason to go and commit mass murder or whatever. Two, the story doesn't make sense. How is one lit on fire and somehow retains all of their hair, additionally charring it to a different color, have bleach become infused into their skin (that also somehow manages to not look burnt or whatever)? Why would those kids stick a knife on Jeff upon their first meeting? Forgive me for not really knowing the story well, but I think these kids are like TWELVE. I thought twelve year olds played Minecraft and Roblox and Call of Duty, not pulling knives on other twelve year olds FOR ... more

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我非常讨厌这种火辣辣的意大利面，尽管《发条》这样的故事更糟糕，但事实上，这种令人憎恶的东西如此受欢迎和喜爱，使我更加讨厌它。作为一个非常喜欢苗条男人的人，尽管它不再可怕，每当我看到杰夫和修长被描绘成朋友时，我都会翻白眼。说真的。住手

I hate this Pasta with a burning passion, even though stories like Clockwork are worse, it's the fact that this abomination is so popular and loved that makes me hate it even more. And as someone who is a big fan of the Slender Man (even though it isn't scary anymore), I roll my eyes whenever I see Jeff and Slender being portrayed as friends. Seriously. Stop it.

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像这样的垃圾故事的流行使得人们不可能对人类有任何信仰。当有那么多好的故事/作者在那里几乎没有得到任何关注的时候，看到人们赞扬这样一个写得不好、毫无意义的垃圾是件很痛苦的事。牛的心态是最好的

The popularity of garbage stories like this makes it impossible to have any faith in humanity. It's physically painful to see people praising such a poorly written, nonsensical piece of trash when there are so many other good stories/authors out there that get little to no attention at all. Cattle mentality at its finest.

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我真的很讨厌主要的恐怖片。我讨厌那些以杀手角色为原型的电影。我喜欢那些不需要杀戮就能写出一个好故事的电影。这个故事里的很多东西都没有意义。它写得不好，或者吓人。可怕。主要的令人毛骨悚然的意大利面粉丝们需要停止。这会毁了我的生活。我最喜欢的恐怖面食类型是1999年的诺恩德豪斯和类似的故事

I really HATE the main creepypastas. I HATE the ones based off of a killer character. I love ones that don't need killing to make a good story. A lot of the things in this story make no sense. It's not well written, or scary. Terrible. And fan girls of the main creepy pasta need to stop. It ruins it for me. My favorite type of creepy pasta is Noend House, 1999, and similar stories.