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写得很好,提纲也做得很好。故事可以分为2,3,甚至5个主要的主题部分。唯一的一点是,据说马克的结局非常突然。但谁知道这可能是有原因的!
Very well written and the outline is well made. The story can be divided into 2,3 or even 5 major themed parts. The only point is that Mark is originally said to have a very abrupt ending. But who knows maybe even that was for a reason!
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