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这是一个写得很好的故事,我不完全怪简想报复杰夫。如果有人杀了我的家人,我也要报复。但是,每个人,包括杰夫的家人,都忘了杰夫经历了什么。他们甚至从来没有考虑过兰迪、基思和特洛伊对他做了什么,这就是他成为今天这样的原因,杰夫最终后悔杀了他的家人,尤其是刘翔,他曾经为保护刘翔而战斗过,所以他不可能都是坏人
It is a very well written story and I don't totally blame Jane for wanting to get even with Jeff. I would want revenge too if someone killed my family. However, everyone, including Jeff's family, forget what Jeff went through. They never even considered what Randy, Keith, and Troy did to him, which is what made him what he is today. And Jeff does eventually regret killing his family, especially Liu, whom he once fought to protect, so he can't be all bad.
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我只是不太喜欢这个故事。杰夫是怎么进入酒店和酒吧的,眼皮烧焦了,脸上刻着笑容?如果简不打算杀杰夫,她为什么要和杰夫一起去旅馆?为什么简一直等着杀杰夫?我有更多的问题,我有点吹毛求疵。如果你喜欢这个故事,那是绝对好的,我就是不喜欢
I just didn't like this story too much. How does Jeff get into a hotel and bar WITH BURNED OUT EYELIDS AND A SMILE CARVED IN? Why did Jane go to the hotel with Jeff if she wasn't going to kill him? Why did Jane wait for FOREVER to kill Jeff?I have more questions and I am nitpicking a little bit. If you like this story that is absolutely fine, I just don't.
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我讨厌人们认为简只是杰夫的女孩版。事实并非如此。杰夫创造简的基本方法是摧毁她的生命和她的脸。我是说,他和他一样用汽油和漂白剂烧了她
I hate that people think that Jane is just the girl version of Jeff. That's not really the case. Jeff created Jane basically by destroying her life and her face. I mean he burned her with gasoline and bleach just like him.
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我喜欢这个。我总是喜欢有一个女孩版本的东西,他们互相抵触。我喜欢当你读简的故事时你能感受到她的愤怒。至少我喜欢
I love this one. I always like when there is a girl version of something and they go against each other. I love how you can feel the anger of jane when you read her story. Well at least I did.
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我喜欢这个故事,但是简,你真的认为杀人杰夫会发疯,但一个好的故事却很棒吗
I love the story but jane do you really think that killing people jeff will get mad but still a good story its awesome
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我很讨厌这两个故事的情节。我都很讨厌这两个故事
I read both there storys. I see why jane hates him. Both storys are actily around the same story in some parts. I love the story line.
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哦天啊是的!我很喜欢这个故事,但为什么人们要把它们运过来?谁在乎呢,不过这故事太棒了!-阿普斯塔姆333
Aw god yes! I frigging love this story but why do people ship them? Who cares, great story though! - ArpstaAmy333
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这是一个伟大的令人毛骨悚然的原因有很多
This was a great creepypasta for many reasons
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我最喜欢的。如果你同意的话。认识他们的人对我都很好
My favorite. Ifyou agree coment. Everyone who knows them is fine by me.
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真是令人叹为观止
It was breath taking
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