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《杀手杰夫》是我读过的第一本恐怖小说,这是我第一次读到这本书。当我读到这本书的时候,我妈妈和弟弟都在公园里,我几乎从来没有一个人在家,所以我把这当作一个读恐怖小说的机会。我不是说恐怖,当我第一次读到它的时候,我站在那里,觉得这并不可怕,然后转向Jeff Returns,这就是我开始发狂的地方。我立刻关掉电脑,跑进我的卧室,带着我的三只狗,其中两只非常大,还有看门狗,然后我打开儿童电视,读一些浪漫小说,任何能让我忘记的东西。因为你越想它,它就越困扰你
Jeff the Killer was the first creepypasta I'd ever read, and boy was that a mistake for the first time. When I read it my mom and brother were at the park, I am almost never home alone so I took this as a chance to read something scary. Well I didn't mean horrifying, when I first read it I stood there and thought this isn't scary and then turned to Jeff Returns, that's where I started to get freaked out. I imediatly shut off the computer and ran into my bed room (taking my three dogs, two of which were very large and guard dogs) Then I turned on childrens T.V. and read some romance novel, anything to get my mind off of it. Because the more you think of it, the more it haunts you.
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我知道我记得这是我第一次听说的恐怖分子,我第一次在Tatstop视频列表上听说它,我晚上把它放在我的房间里,当我听说我被吓坏了,不得不睡在我的parnets房间里,那是一个真实的故事
I know I remeber it being one of the first creepypastas I heard about too, I first heard about it on the TatsTopVideos list I wathced it at night in my room, and when I heard that I was so scarded that I had to sleep in my parnets room, that night (True Story).
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《杀手杰夫》写得不好,不切实际,甚至两年后的今天,我都会觉得这个故事让我毛骨悚然。我仍然害怕睡觉时没有锁上窗户,每当我听到敲门声……好吧,你明白了吧。我认为这是一个很好的面食,因为它会悄悄地爬出来,这就是爬行帕斯塔的重点。如果故事是这样的话,一些语法错误可以忽略不计如果你在读了一个令人毛骨悚然的故事后不觉得毛骨悚然,那就意味着这个故事并不可怕,也不属于这个网站。杰夫是个令人毛骨悚然的人,不是完美的,而是令人毛骨悚然的!我必须说,杰夫不是我的第一个毛骨悚然的人,这也说明了它足够令人毛骨悚然,足以成为头号人物
Jeff the Killer is poor-written, unrealistic, story that creeps me out even now two years later. I'm still afraid to sleep without my windows locked and whenever I hear a knock on it... well you get the idea.I think it's a good pasta because it CREEPS OUT that is the point of creepypasta. Some grammar mistakes can be ignored if the story creeps out, and if you don't feel chills down your spine after reading one creepypasta story it means that story isn't creepy and it doesn't belong to the site. Jeff is creepy, not perfect but creepy!I must say that Jeff was NOT my first creepypasta which also shows that it is creepy enough to be a number one.
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我觉得凶手杰夫不应该这么高高在上。《怪人帕斯塔》写得很差。整个故事似乎不可能。一个男孩把眼皮烧掉了?这张照片是我唯一觉得毛骨悚然的东西。这个故事是废话。杰夫也太高估了,他大多不是一个令人毛骨悚然的连环杀手,而是一个可爱、有魅力的人物。我不是说每个人都这样画他,而是说真的。他是一个在脸上刻下微笑的连环杀手。他可能甚至没有感受爱或同情。他从来没有这么做过。当我第一次读这个故事的时候,并没有真正吓到我。但是在搜索了这个角色并进行了研究之后,我才感到害怕
I don't think Jeff the Killer should be so high up. The creepypasta was poorly written. The whole story seems impossible. A boy burning his eyelids off? The picture is the only thing I found creepy. The story is crap. Jeff is also too overrated, he mostly isn't shown as a creepy serial killer but more shown as a cute, attractive figure. I'm not saying that everyone draws him like this but seriously the hell. He is a serial killer who carved a smile into his face. He probably doesn't even feel love or empathy. He never did in the first place. When I first read the story, it didn't really scare me. But after searching up the character and researching that's when It scared me.
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天哪,这件事把我吓坏了,已经快一年了,我睡不着觉了。这张照片真可怕!故事…剧透警报!如果他发现自己的嘴被烧焦了,他就永远被人打得鼻青脸肿。如果他发现自己的孩子被人打得鼻青脸肿的话,他会永远被人打得鼻青脸肿。如果他被人打得鼻青脸肿的话,他会永远被人打得鼻青脸肿,然后被人打得鼻青脸肿,他对你微笑,嘴里流出鲜血,对你低声说“去睡觉吧”。然后他杀了你,在你嘴里刻上一个微笑..颤抖感谢上帝这不是真的..无论你做什么,除非你有勇气,否则不要读故事或看照片!
Oh my god... This thing scared me so bad, it's been nearly a year and I can't sleep. THE PICTURE IS FRIGGING TERRIFYING!The story... SPOILER ALERT!Anyways, the story starts with a kid named Jeffery Woods. He gets bullied and burned and bleached. His eyelids are burned off and his nose gets beaten off. He later slits his mouth to smile forever, and goes psycho, killing all of his family and goes on a killing spree. If he finds you, he smiles at you with blood coming out of his mouth and whispers "Go to sleep" to you. He then kills you and carves a smile into your mouth...*Shivers* Thank god this isn't real... And whatever you do, unless you have guts, DON'T READ THE STORY OR LOOK AT THE PICTURE!
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老实说,和其他人相比,这并不可怕,因为人们倾向于认为杰夫是一个非常强大的人,他真的只是一个十几岁的孩子,很可能在杀死家人并被关起来后很快被抓住,但除此之外,这是一个很好的令人毛骨悚然的地方,但它不值得首先去。老实说,可怕的部分可能不全是关于死亡,而是一个思想是多么容易在情感和身体的痛苦下崩溃,一个人可以多快地恶化,同时也加入了血腥,以增加它的恐怖,但它从来没有真正吓到我,因为被活活烧死没有让他成为撒旦
This isn't a very scary one compared to others in all honesty because people tend to think Jeff as some insanely powerful being and he's truly only a teenager and will probably be caught soon after killing his family and locked up, but other than that, it is a good creepypasta but it doesn't deserve to go first. In all honesty the scary parts probably weren't all about the deaths, but how easy a mind can break under emotional and physical pain, and how fast one can deteriorate, while also adding gore in to add to the horror of it, but it never truly scared me because being burned alive did not make him satan.
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《杀手杰夫》也是我读过的第一部恐怖片。但它也有很多缺点。第一:它不现实。你不会烧掉你的眼皮,也不会在脸上刻上笑容。还有兰迪,不管那个坏孩子叫什么名字,他都有枪。杰夫不会那么强壮。第二:写得不好。我需要多说几句吗?我十二岁的妹妹写得更好,而且她写得很差。第三:粉丝们把一切都毁了。我以前喜欢《杀手杰夫》,现在我甚至不觉得这个故事可怕。粉丝们需要冷静下来。大多数粉丝都是11岁或12岁的女孩,如果你对杰夫的看法不好,她们会很生气。很多粉丝把他描绘成“可爱的”和“不错的”。但是拜托,伙计们!他杀了他的家人!我很抱歉这么说,但如果杰夫是真的,他会毫不犹豫地杀了你。这个故事有太多的缺点,而且总的来说,这不是一部很好的恐怖片。我不想说,但凶手杰夫应该在这个名单上要低得多,即使在……更多
Jeff The Killer was also the first creepypasta I ever read. But there are quite a few flaws with it. Number one: It's not realistic. You wouldn't burn off your eyelids, and carve a smile into your face. And Randy (Whatever the bad kid's name was) had a GUN. Jeff wouldn't be that strong. Number two: Poorly written. Need I say more? My twelve year old sister could write better, and she's terrible at writing. Number three: The fans ruined everything about it. I used to like Jeff The Killer, and now I don't even find the story scary. The fandom needs to chill out. Most of the fans are 11 or 12 year old girls who get upset if you realm poorly about Jeff. a lot of fans portray him as "cute" and "nice". But come on, guys! He killed his family! I'm sorry to say it, but if Jeff was real, he wouldn't hesitate to kill you. There are too many flaws with the story, and overall, it's just not a very good Creepypasta. Hate to say it, but Jeff The Killer should be a lot lower on this list, if even on ... more
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杀人犯杰夫是最可怕的恐怖分子之一,不值得大肆宣传。这个故事不现实,写得很差。我是说,他怎么能不烧眼睛就割眼皮呢?你为什么要割眼皮?!如果你不眨眼,你的眼睛会干枯,你可能会失明。你烧伤后皮肤怎么会变白?火不会使你的皮肤苍白!还有,最让我费解的是这张照片,原来的照片是一个自杀的女孩的照片,但是有人编辑了这个女孩的照片,把它变成了一个怪物!最后,一个13岁的孩子怎么会有疯狂杀人的动机呢?他太强大了,他本可以在13岁时杀死自己的父亲!结论:杀手杰夫是一个努力尝试的人,他的故事写得太快了。P-s:“去睡觉吧”是我这辈子听过的最糟糕的流行语。地狱见!
Jeff the killer is one of the worst creepypastas and is not worth the hype. The story is unrealistic and very poor written.I mean, how could he cuts his eyelids without burning his eyes? Why the hell would you cut your eyelids?! If you were not to blink, your eyes will be dried out and you could become blind.How could your skin turn white after you got burned? Fire does not cause your skin pale!Also, the thing that digusts me the most is this picture. The original photo was a a picture of a girl who had commited suicide, but some people edited the picture of this girl and made it to a monster! (aka this picture here)Lastly, how could a thirteen year old child have the motivation to become insane and killing people? He is too overpowered and he could have been able to kill his own dad at the age of 13!Conclusion: Jeff the Killer is a try hard who's story is written too fast.P-S: "Go to sleep" is the worst catchphrase I have heard in my life. See you in hell!
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我同意…给麦克斯先生
I agree...to the max - MrGuyDudeMan
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我读过杰夫的故事!我一个人住,但是当我读的时候,我会给我认识的每个人打电话,几乎有35个人出现,我大声朗读杰夫!当我说完的时候,所有的东西都爬出来了,我们把它当作一种过夜的方式,但是没有人睡觉。这句话就是让人整夜睁大眼睛的原因!杰夫是最好的!谢谢你让我说出我的想法。我第一次尝试反馈。我如何尝试写一份意大利面?我的电子邮件是raelynniebur90@gmail.Com请告知!我有时会尝试一个故事。我脑子里有一个想法,但不知道如何把它从脑海中带到报纸上,让它变得有意义。我会焦急地等待它的建议和思考。真诚的,雷林达
I've read Jeff's stories! I live alone, but when I read them I call everyone I know. Almost 35 people show up and I read Jeff aloud! By the time I'm finished all are creeped out and we make it a kind of sleepover, but no one sleeps. The sentence is what keeps the eyes open all nite! Jeff is the best! Thanks for letting me speak my mind. My first attempt at feedback. How do I try and write a pasta? My email is raelynniebur90@gmail. Com please advise! I sometimes attempt a story. I have an idea in my mind but don't know how to get it from the mind to the paper and have it make any sense.I'll be anxiously awaiting it advise and thinking. Sincerely, raelynda
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