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我仍然喜欢这个故事,但我必须说,戈尔多可怕,很有缺陷的。
I still like the story and all, but I gotta say, it's more gore than scary and it's very flawed.
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其可怕的!他们着急,让他们的个性有担心随着时间的推移,但这只是被迫的。写作是可怕的,节奏是,主角是制服。事实上它使用强奸和乱伦只是使他们的性格有同情点恶心!让你恐怖人物同情和可怕的极其困难,和从我看过creepypastas像这样,没有人能实现。你可以死于你的眼睛感染挤压我在你的眼睛时钟,时钟!
Its just awful! They try so hard to make their character have a fear with time, but it is just so forced. The writing is awful, the pacing is way off, and the main character is overpowered. The fact it uses rape and incest only to make their character have sympathy points is disgusting! MAKING YOUR HORROR CHARACTER SYMPATHETIC AND SCARY IS INCREDIBLY HARD, and from what I have seen from creepypastas like this, no one can achieve. You can go die from your eye infection from squeezing I clock in your eye, Clockwork!
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